I took what I had till now and put it into a first dummy. The Layout for the pages is alright, but we could still squeeze in an additional doublepage if we use the side with the children reading the book for the impressum and the inner title, instead for the actual story. That would mean, I have one more scary page to come up with and I need a place to put it. My first idea would be right after the loft to make the skip to the cat a bit better...but what could I use as the theme? A tree in front of a window which scares everyone who passes by on the way down from the loft? How about, there's something in the garden? Maybe the big clock strikes midnight, really loud?