Ok, the text looks ok for now, so I work on the colours.
After all, I dont want to start working on paper without exactly knowing what I want to do.
Here's a first try.
I tried to get at least a little yellow or yellow-ish colour in each composition to create a red line throughout the book. Still, there are some panels, I dont like. The look under the bed needs other colours I think and the mother-monster too.
I'm also worried about the text. Is bright text on dark background ok?
I'd prefer dark text but it's ticky so many dark values in the pictures.